Nice job, an intriguing story and well weaved. I kept nodding my head reading through it, recognising some of the lines almost verbatim...
You may want to look at the video titled "How can Moodle change a school" at http://human.edublogs.org (search under Moodle category if not on the front page, 2 clips).
I created the video (2 clips) to share the experience of great, positive changes that have happened at our school since installing Moodle and the ways staff and students have really adopted it.
The video would go nicely with your story.
Keep up the good work