I'd like some feedback, please, on the language I'm including with the 27 courses I'm about to add to Moodlenet. I will be adding one course each for each of the 27 units of GeoGebra's Illustrative Mathematics.
Here's what I have for the first resource. Each course will have the same general description
This course includes links to Grade 6 Unit 2 - Introducing Ratios of Geogebra's interactive apps that allow teachers to virtually look over the shoulder of their students as they’re working Illustrative Mathematics problems in either their video conferencing classroom or in-person classroom. Moodle adds asynchronous communications between students and teachers - and between students, and several ways to assess student learning. This course will work in Canvas, Schoology, D2L, and Moodle. To add this course to your LMS download the course, then upload the course to your LMS. If you have your Moodle site configured with MoodleNet, just click 'Send to Moodle' above, right.
I'm mostly concerned with the last sentence; is it the best way to describe what a user should do? Any other suggestions are, of course, welcome.