Hi Kristen,
If I correctly understand what you want, you CAN do it with a a quiz essay type question. The trick is to make sure you use any Question behavior EXCEPT for one of the Deferred feedback options, so that Review options > During the attempt is enabled and that you have checks for everything except Overall feedback.
Type your model response and marking guide info into the General feedback area of the essay question, when you create the essay question.
When the student finishes and submits the quiz, they will see their response and right underneath it, the General feedback. Even after they finish the review, they can come back and look again later. If they are allowed to take the quiz multiple time, each one of the attempts will be available for review. There NO need for a teacher to actually grade the essay question. Completion tracking can even be used, just do NOT use any one of the options that require a grade. Just simply set for Student must view this activity to complete it, will work.